For the past few weeks we have been thinking about stories with dilemmas in our Literacy work. We have created some super photostory videos to help us sequence our ideas, can you work out what dilemma the character is facing?
Today we have been thinking about how to describe our characters for our dilemma stories by showing the reader what they are like, rather than just saying it, e.g. we might say ‘the sun reflected from his shining golden hair’ rather than ‘he is blond’. It makes our writing much more descriptive. Click on the photos to read some of our work, how well do you think we are doing?
2 responses so far ↓
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ella
// Mar 6, 2009 at 7:45 pm
i really like the deadly dilemas it’s really dramatic
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gracie
// Mar 30, 2009 at 4:23 pm
Thank’s for puting my dilemma story on the blog
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